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From Greater Chicagoland Area , USA

We are two recent college grads who are writing about what we know... being recent college grads. Our work tends to lean more towards the "Always Sunny" side of comedy. Anyways, give our script a read and let us know how much you hate it.

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Post Grad Dreams

Added at 3:34 on Friday, Jan 20, 2012

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Following their graduation, three best friends move back home. They quickly discover that chasing their dreams isn't half as hard as having to deal with their dysfunctional parents.

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Post Grad Dreams

Originally we had written a graduation scene, but it wasn't very funny and felt out of place. And in regard to the teaching note, there were a few instances where we felt it would work (August graduation, it being a year-round school, etc).

At 7:00 on Tuesday, Feb 7, 2012

Experiences

I have to agree with D.R., there were so many characters that it took my attention off of the story and broke my concentration. Breaking up the scene description might also help make the story a quicker/easier read.

At 11:07 on Wednesday, Feb 1, 2012

Post Grad Dreams

Thanks Nicholas,

We're glad you liked it.

Yeah, Madison is a recurring character. It was really difficult to highlight each of the three characters and their relationship with their parents AND introduce her without it seeming awkward.

Thanks for your comment.
We'll be sure to check out your script.

At 12:06 on Monday, Jan 30, 2012

Post Grad Dreams

Thanks Kate!

Glad you enjoyed it. We'll be sure to check out your script.

At 6:44 on Tuesday, Jan 24, 2012

Quarter Life Crisis

damn, ignore my misuse of they're/their. it's late.

At 3:50 on Friday, Jan 20, 2012

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