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		<title>Comment on Some changes around here&#8230; by admin</title>
		<link>http://storyboardtv.com/blog/2011/02/some-changes-around-here/comment-page-1/#comment-360</link>
		<dc:creator>admin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2011 17:22:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You are correct! Sorting will have no bearing on who makes it to the next round. It&#039;s just a fun way to see what people are talking about.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You are correct! Sorting will have no bearing on who makes it to the next round. It&#8217;s just a fun way to see what people are talking about.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Some changes around here&#8230; by Keysieboy12</title>
		<link>http://storyboardtv.com/blog/2011/02/some-changes-around-here/comment-page-1/#comment-359</link>
		<dc:creator>Keysieboy12</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2011 06:07:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sorry the change I meant was in #1 above. Thanks again- Phil.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry the change I meant was in #1 above. Thanks again- Phil.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Some changes around here&#8230; by Keysieboy12</title>
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		<dc:creator>Keysieboy12</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2011 06:06:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>On change #2 above, may I assume that the &quot;sorting by number of comments&quot; will have no bearing on the end results. I just want to clarify this point- Thanks- Phil.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>On change #2 above, may I assume that the &#8220;sorting by number of comments&#8221; will have no bearing on the end results. I just want to clarify this point- Thanks- Phil.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Blog: Matt Schenk and Ben Wilson by Mary Schenk</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Schenk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Apr 2011 15:31:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I particularly like your explanation of the need for preparation and structuring of the project, which is essential. Makes me wish I had a writing partner! My current project is a series of books - three at the moment - fiction, but set in a real place. Getting them to segue one to another with a connection, yet able to stand on their own, is the biggest issue. You zero in on the necessity of this sort of planning and your script is fascinating.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I particularly like your explanation of the need for preparation and structuring of the project, which is essential. Makes me wish I had a writing partner! My current project is a series of books &#8211; three at the moment &#8211; fiction, but set in a real place. Getting them to segue one to another with a connection, yet able to stand on their own, is the biggest issue. You zero in on the necessity of this sort of planning and your script is fascinating.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Blog: Kris Thom White by Michael Fox</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael Fox</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Apr 2011 13:59:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, thanks for writing this. I plan to use the character questions on my characters&#039; Twitter accounts and see what happens!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, thanks for writing this. I plan to use the character questions on my characters&#8217; Twitter accounts and see what happens!</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Industry Panel for This Competition (#3) by Josh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Josh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Apr 2011 02:43:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice Panel!</description>
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		<title>Comment on Some changes around here&#8230; by Josh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Josh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Apr 2011 14:20:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great changes!</description>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Blog: Alex Sinesi by Matt Schenk</title>
		<link>http://storyboardtv.com/blog/2011/04/guest-blog-alex-sinesi/comment-page-1/#comment-196</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt Schenk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Apr 2011 16:29:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Some good points up there Alex.  I especially agree with the discipline.  I don&#039;t know that it has to be 100 percent structured, but it has to be there.  A schedule should always be in place.  A familiar place to write should be your safe haven.

It&#039;s really interesting to come on this baord and read new teleplays (yours, incidentally is the second one I&#039;m going through, and I&#039;ll have comments for you this week, PROMISE.)  

There&#039;s a great Stephen King &quot;tutorial&quot; called On Writing.  It, to me, breaks down one of the most fundamental misunderstandings about writing.  And I am as guilty (if not more so) than anyone at breaking this rule.  To break the rules, you must intrinsically understand exactly how to use them properly.  There is structure in chaotic pieces.

The other great thing I learned from that book (which, while applying to a novel, still works for most story telling mediums) is another rule often broken, and something you address in this post.  You can never care more about your character&#039;s well being than the story.

There will always come a day when you realize the story is taking your character down a dark path and you can never compromise and attempt to steer them from their inevitable conclusion (ahem, Stephanie Meyer).  

Lastly, you touch a great point about criticism.  It&#039;s funny, we both thrive on criticism, and attempt to buck it.  Every one of us.  It&#039;s tough to hear that what you&#039;ve written isn&#039;t perfect.  Especially if it&#039;s several drafts into the process.  But, fine tuning is paramount.  That&#039;s what is great about this site.  We&#039;re already fixing elements of our pilot based on feedback.  Will we make EVERY change that&#039;s suggested?  Of course not.  But great criticism does two wonderful things: it offers a solution to a problem you didn&#039;t know you had, and it reminds you that you&#039;re fallible.  Thanks for the post!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some good points up there Alex.  I especially agree with the discipline.  I don&#8217;t know that it has to be 100 percent structured, but it has to be there.  A schedule should always be in place.  A familiar place to write should be your safe haven.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s really interesting to come on this baord and read new teleplays (yours, incidentally is the second one I&#8217;m going through, and I&#8217;ll have comments for you this week, PROMISE.)  </p>
<p>There&#8217;s a great Stephen King &#8220;tutorial&#8221; called On Writing.  It, to me, breaks down one of the most fundamental misunderstandings about writing.  And I am as guilty (if not more so) than anyone at breaking this rule.  To break the rules, you must intrinsically understand exactly how to use them properly.  There is structure in chaotic pieces.</p>
<p>The other great thing I learned from that book (which, while applying to a novel, still works for most story telling mediums) is another rule often broken, and something you address in this post.  You can never care more about your character&#8217;s well being than the story.</p>
<p>There will always come a day when you realize the story is taking your character down a dark path and you can never compromise and attempt to steer them from their inevitable conclusion (ahem, Stephanie Meyer).  </p>
<p>Lastly, you touch a great point about criticism.  It&#8217;s funny, we both thrive on criticism, and attempt to buck it.  Every one of us.  It&#8217;s tough to hear that what you&#8217;ve written isn&#8217;t perfect.  Especially if it&#8217;s several drafts into the process.  But, fine tuning is paramount.  That&#8217;s what is great about this site.  We&#8217;re already fixing elements of our pilot based on feedback.  Will we make EVERY change that&#8217;s suggested?  Of course not.  But great criticism does two wonderful things: it offers a solution to a problem you didn&#8217;t know you had, and it reminds you that you&#8217;re fallible.  Thanks for the post!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Blog: Alex Sinesi by Robert Frank (rwf1234)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Robert Frank (rwf1234)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 Apr 2011 18:29:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, I&#039;ll get ideas in the most gallant places that which molds it on a homework pad or a tape recorder feedback. Maybe, this is feedback to the idea in your shower. Don&#039;t just learn the English Language, make a sort of management. You can play back the audio cassettes to be “Grammar Smart.” I think that I’ll go for the “Cool Whip.”</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I&#8217;ll get ideas in the most gallant places that which molds it on a homework pad or a tape recorder feedback. Maybe, this is feedback to the idea in your shower. Don&#8217;t just learn the English Language, make a sort of management. You can play back the audio cassettes to be “Grammar Smart.” I think that I’ll go for the “Cool Whip.”</p>
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		<title>Comment on Some changes around here&#8230; by Davout</title>
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		<dc:creator>Davout</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Mar 2011 19:25:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s great to hear that you&#039;ve withdrawn the signing requirement. I was one of the people that balked at having to sign an option agreement in order to advance. Now that that&#039;s no longer needed, I&#039;m going to enter for 2011. Thanks for being willing to make changes to improve the competition for everyone.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s great to hear that you&#8217;ve withdrawn the signing requirement. I was one of the people that balked at having to sign an option agreement in order to advance. Now that that&#8217;s no longer needed, I&#8217;m going to enter for 2011. Thanks for being willing to make changes to improve the competition for everyone.</p>
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